The Ribbon
The Ribbon is a contemporary motor yacht available for private charter on Sydney Harbour — ideal for intimate gatherings, romantic escapes, and small group celebrations hosted by Sydney Privé. LEFT SHORT PARAGRAPH (currently "Visit iconic destinations and hidden gems") Cruise past Sydney's iconic landmarks and into secluded harbour bays most visitors never see. RIGHT LONGER PARAGRAPH (the "designed around food, wine and atmosphere" block) This is a fully hosted private charter — not a shared boat tour. The experience is built around food, wine and atmosphere on the water. Every booking includes exclusive use of the vessel, professional crew, fuel and Sydney Privé coordination. Food and wine are curated separately, so guests can personalise their level of indulgence — from refined canapés through to a full onboard dining experience with a private chef and certified sommelier. MAIN BODY COPY (the "RIBBON – STYLISH MOTOR YACHT" section) RIBBON — STYLISH MOTOR YACHT Step aboard Ribbon, a contemporary motor yacht designed for relaxed yet refined experiences on Sydney Harbour. Hosted by Sydney Privé, Ribbon provides a chic and intimate setting ideal for couples, small groups, and discreet corporate gatherings. Clean modern lines, generous deck space and an effortless cruising profile make Ribbon a comfortable and elegant backdrop for curated food and wine experiences — all while gliding past Sydney's most celebrated harbour scenery. This experience is built for guests who value privacy, ease and understated luxury. The focus is on atmosphere, genuine conversation and time well spent on the water. Pricing — Private Charter up to 4 Guests SeasonDurationPriceSummer (1 Oct – 31 Mar)4 hours$4,450December4 hours$4,950Winter (1 Apr – 30 Sep)3 hours$3,445 All pricing includes private use of the vessel, professional crew, fuel and Sydney Privé hosting. Onboard Dining Experience (optional add-on) Elevate your charter with a premium onboard dining experience. Chef Pierre from Noranise Dining prepares a bespoke menu live aboard, paired with a curated wine tasting led by certified sommelier Matt. Designed for guests who appreciate exceptional cuisine and seamless hospitality, this add-on transforms your harbour cruise into a genuine culinary occasion. A FEW NOTES FOR YOU: Duplicate H1/H2 — the current setup hurts rankings. The rewrite above fixes this cleanly without touching your Webflow layout logic, just swap the text. "The Ribbon" as H1 — I've added the key search phrase private motor yacht charter Sydney Harbour directly into the H1, which is where Google weighs it most. Pricing table — formatted as a table rather than running text. Better to scan for users, better for Google to parse. "Optional add-on" label on the dining section — worth adding that tag or a small line so guests don't assume it's included in base pricing and then feel misled. Up to you if you want it explicit on the page or just in the enquiry flow. Want me to also draft the alt text for the hero image, or work on the page slug and any structured data (schema markup) for the charter?